I know now there are mistakes I can never take back.

Another orphaned poem. I’m not quite sure what the prompt was, but this one–though ‘unfinished’–feels like a completed poem to me.

I know now
there are moments
I can never take back.


Maggie Mae I · January 17, 2012 at 6:00 PM

Absolutely!! Short, to the point, with a good flow. I like!!!

Richard P · January 17, 2012 at 8:40 PM

A simple, but very important thought.

Emily He · January 18, 2012 at 9:43 AM

If you hadn’t mentioned it was unfinished, I would’ve thought it was complete!

patriciakirsch · February 12, 2012 at 10:30 AM

Perfect and so true.

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