I’m in Hawaii so I don’t exactly feel like updating Typewriter Poetry every day 🙂 But because it’s raining, here’s a poem from April 4th.

“Couple #4”

We shortcut paradise
with an addict
in lightning canopy rain.

Adrenaline thins.
The road gives;
no walls, no brakes,

no dead end to blame.
A cruel sail
beyond sand, clay. Sea vine roots.

And god–how we screamed at each other, then.

april 4th 2012


Richard Guest · April 7, 2012 at 10:42 AM

This is really great, although not for you, I suspect.

    b r · April 7, 2012 at 12:20 PM

    thanks! It’s funny that everyone always thinks these poems are about me…I’d say less than 25% of them are actually from my perspective 🙂

      Richard Guest · April 7, 2012 at 12:24 PM

      Whoops, sorry – it just seems so real. Consider me told.

    b r · April 7, 2012 at 5:23 PM

    That’s the best kind of compliment! No apologies required 🙂

Tammy · April 8, 2012 at 9:26 AM

Hawaii? so jealous. Love couple #4.

    b r · April 10, 2012 at 10:41 AM

    It has been really nice. I leave on the 20th, but I might come back after my birthday.

    I like them, too, especially because of their very human flaws.

Emily He · April 11, 2012 at 2:59 AM

It’s amazing what you can do with so few words!!

Francina · April 11, 2012 at 10:51 AM

perfectly described, Billimarie! Wishing you a wonderful time in Hawaii

Ciao, Francina

francesAntoinette · August 6, 2012 at 3:20 PM

This is great!

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